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Originally Posted by meatloaf-unofficial
what I have some factual statments that are wrong? Please tell me as I would like to know 
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Glancing over the minor ones, these stood out to me.
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Following the release of what Meat Loaf claimed was the best album yet
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I think Meat claimed CHSIB was his "most perfect album since Bat", but can't find a source besides Wikipedia.
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‘The Bases Are Loaded Tour’ was to prove all people that Meat Loaf was not past it but instead within his best before date.
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To the best of my knowledge, it was never claimed that the "The Bases Are Loaded" tour should prove Meat was not past it.
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Making his only 2006 UK show at London’s Royal Albert Hall, looked to be the best review since his Bat Out Of Hell II Tour back in 1993.
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Unless you have read any and all reviews of all shows he did, I doubt this is true.
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For Bat Out Of Hell III, he joined forces with old-time songwriter who wrote the first two Bat albums; Jim Steinman.
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As said before, clearly not the case.
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Desmond Child joined forces to produce the album after Steinman took a back seat due to having quite a few heart attacks and strokes.
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Child didn't join forces with anyone: he produced the album on his own. Steinman did not take the back seat: he was not involved at all, as he declined a offer that would make him the best paid producer in Rock History (or so we're told), and only gave permission to use Pig and Cry To Heaven in the lawsuit-settlement.
And please, define "quite a few" and source that claim.
And for a persuasive essay, this is the ultimate cop-out:
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All in all, there is only one correct answer to this issue of whether Meat Loaf is past his sell-by date or not. The answer to it, is your own.
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Unless I'm mistaken what it means to write a persuasive essay, I'd say that when you ask "Is Meat Loaf Past His Sell-By Date?", you should make a case whether or not he is past it based on the available "evidence" and "facts", and reach a conclusive yes-or-no answer in the end.
But then again, I'm not a teacher.