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Paul191 · 11 Oct 2007, 12:05

I remember my GCSE days and I cringe when I look back at my essays, lol. They were so bad. However, I'm relieved by the fact I can but that down to dropping standards in comprehensives........ Since leaving school, and finishing my A-Levels, my writing and grammer skills have greatly increased. Forget about the lack of persuasiveness, I found it really hard to follow your essay because the grammer was soooooooo so bad. You used ';' when when you should have just used a comma and you missed out commas where there should have been one. You need to sort out spelling aswell. There are a lot more mistakes but it doesn't take a genius to work them out.

11 Oct 2007, 12:05	#39
Paul191 Mega Loafer Join Date: 26.11.2005 Location: Posts: 1,530	I remember my GCSE days and I cringe when I look back at my essays, lol. They were so bad. However, I'm relieved by the fact I can but that down to dropping standards in comprehensives........ Since leaving school, and finishing my A-Levels, my writing and grammer skills have greatly increased. Forget about the lack of persuasiveness, I found it really hard to follow your essay because the grammer was soooooooo so bad. You used ';' when when you should have just used a comma and you missed out commas where there should have been one. You need to sort out spelling aswell. There are a lot more mistakes but it doesn't take a genius to work them out.