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Originally Posted by AndyK
Well since you asked:
You didn't start it with a capital letter, strictly speaking the four dots you included aren't correct punctuation (it should only be three dots) , and your usage of "whats" is incorrect, you should have used "what's" which is the shortened form of "what is". Other than that it seems perfectly correct to me.  |
You forgot capitalisation of the "What's" too, since it's following a full stop or three... Oh, and there should also be a space between the three dots and the start of the next sentance.