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Super Loafer
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Hi Everyone
I wrote this Song and because of meat working with various people I wrote this. I don't like to advertise my stuff online but sometimes you have no choice if your gonna be heard. If you can offer opinions would be cool to know what you all think as I value your opinions being a fellow meat loaf fan! For the record I wrote to patti in (2008ish) on her official myspace page as I wrote her a song well just the words and she said she liked it was a dream! There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin Lyrics Grace Shackleton There's something I wanna tell you holding these feelings inside does no one any favors And it's so cruel but baby you need to know the truth I need you There Ain't no mistake I need you, So hold on I know I'm strong but I need you to Pull me through What do I have to do? To shake these fears away To Make These fears fall Away-(fall away) So many sleepless nights Offer you shelter from the storm Turn the dream into a prayer where do we start? It's in My heart I don't know even when to begin There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin (Chorus) There Ain't No Pleasure Without Sin There ain't no pleasure without Sin In the end everything fades to black What do I have to do to get you back? repeat x2 Through the Wind and the rain I need to feel you close again Fading to black fades to black... (Chorus) There ain't no pleasure without Sin There ain't no pleasure without Sin In the end everything fades to black What do I have to do to get you back? I ain't waiting in the shadows but I keep what I feel for you inside field of desire, field of desire, & I wanna let you know you're In My Soul Break out of the light and dream through the night Just like a field of desire, field of desire, Burning fire on the wind blowing in the night (Repeat Chorus) © G Shackleton 2009 |
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Mega Loafer
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its not bad at all, i do a bit of writing myself
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Mega Loafer
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I think that's really good actually, could be epic. Sounds like a very long song.
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Super Loafer
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great lyrics ... seams to be an epic song ... i'd really like to hear it!
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