02 Oct 2006, 18:22
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Mercury Need Your Help!
Mercury are putting together some classic Meat Loaf stories for a rock n’ roll newsletter and would like your help. They are looking for fabled stories about his longest show, flamboyant moments … more big stories rather than fan encounters, but anything will be considered.
If you have anything you would like to contribute please send it as soon as possible to service@mlukfc.com and it will be passed on to Mercury. Please keep to a paragraph. Diane |
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02 Oct 2006, 18:42
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Mega Loafer
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Will we get a copy of this ????
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02 Oct 2006, 20:18
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The Monster Is Luce
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All my stuff would be fan encounters I guess
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02 Oct 2006, 20:33
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02 Oct 2006, 21:27
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03 Oct 2006, 11:42
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You really think I could fit all that into just one paragraph Diane?! lol
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03 Oct 2006, 11:44
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03 Oct 2006, 11:54
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VERY good point - could I have a definition of "paragraph" please!
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03 Oct 2006, 15:25
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 And Lucy ... A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. To be as effective as possible, a paragraph should contain each of the following: Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. Look here http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handou...gl_pgrph2.html or here ... http://www2.actden.com/writ_den/tips/paragrap/index.htm
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03 Oct 2006, 15:36
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And thanks very much to everyone who's contributed so far. Keep 'em coming! I'll get the first batch off to Mercury tonight.Quote:
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03 Oct 2006, 16:10
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Mega Loafer
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you have my one aswell
 Hope you like it By the way - can we get a copy of this when it is released and where from ??? |
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03 Oct 2006, 16:24
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03 Oct 2006, 17:38
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Mega Loafer
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thanks though Diane
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