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Garrett · 26 Jan 2003, 23:38

I sat down and wrote the following lines out of my deepest fantasies.

Part 1: My nocturnal stroll in Obsidian

I wandered down the pitch black streets at the bottom of the city’s gorges. I was looking above my head and stared at the nocturnal sky. The buildings enthroned high into the clouds of the night like bizarre mutants. My eyes sank down. Black and yellow pools of light were floating around me. I reached a misty corner. Lost boys were sitting in the gutter like a tortured rat pack. They stared at me like stone cold statues. Their eyes were blank and their clothes were soaked with mud and blood. Maybe their own blood, maybe anyone elses, maybe the blood of victims, maybe the blood of the decaying carcass lying on the boardwalk in the chrystal moonlight. I fled the fast I could to get away from these god-forgotten creatures, away from these black shadows of perdition. I walked further down the street. Groaning voices whispered in the air. Roaring black metal machines stalked hungry behind my back. Then I stood in front of the entrance to a huge dark tunnel. Painfull angels were screaming in the distance. Then I saw a man coming out of the deep cold jaws of the tunnel. I couldn’t see his face, but I recognised his long hair flowing in the groaning wind, which came out of the black deep hole. I could see the silhouette of a Fender guitar began to take shape. I don’t remember if it was a Telecaster or a Stratocaster, but I do remember that its heart was made fully out of chrome. The man was embraced by his guitar. Then I saw the gleaming eyes in his face. I took one step back. The guy was pacing near and nearer. Finally, he stopped. And I saw his Fender guitar bleeding and the blood was dark and rich like wild berries. He wanted me to follow him, down this huge alley of moist stone, down this endless hallway. Fear was creeping through my bones, but no one could stop me following the guy down to the deep end. And the tunnel seemed to become a titan monster trying to engulf me with his maw.

Maybe the story will be continued... continued, hmm, ahh yes, continued by YOU!!! GIVE IT A TRY!!! I'm waiting for Part 2!

Garrett · 28 Jan 2003, 23:24

Why don't you give your opinion about my short self-written story? And why isn't there anyone, who wants to continue it?

M.Bison · 02 Feb 2003, 18:12

OK Garrett, if you want Part 2 you'll get Part 2!

Part 2 - Your Expirence On The Bikes And The Doomsday Device!
You were lost in the woods, until you stumbled across a playground and it was 1:00PM you see Aaron and you wonder "Were am I?" Then you go into a basketball field and me and my two friends Paul and Nicholas go to play basketball and I ask you do you wanna play? Then you accept the offer but Gary Fleming rides into the field like a speeding tyrant! And we say to him "Watch where you're going next time!" Then the next time Gary passed the field he said "Ye are the Cheeky Girls!" But Nicholas shouts "Cut it out Gary! Stupid [...] [...] anyoyer Gary!" And Gary replied with "I'll give you a shove and run you over so you'll be dead!" Then a few hours later we were at a factory and you walk in the door and the video of I'd Lie For You was playing and you said "I really like the girl's red dress! Do you Bison?" And I replie with "I do!" But 1 hour later Tukayaway and Shane arrive "So whut are ye to lookin' at?" And we said to them "You don't address anyone that way! If yer lookin' of trouble, we'll [...] ye both!" And The Madman arrives and stops the confrontation "Tukayaway! Shane! If ye are talkin' insult about my girlfriend, you'll be dead!" Then Shane takes it serious "If your threatining to kill me and Tukayaway then we're buliding a Doomsday Device!" And back at Shane's headquaters Eggman was not to happy "Why would they wanna kill ye?" He asks Shane, "It's because we were talking insult about there girlfriend!" Then Tukayaway said "On the fourm you mean?" And Shane answerd with "Sort-of." Then Eggman replied with "Really? Just because you said that Patti or Pearl should someday be acting as the main female character? What does Bison be up to these days? Then I should build a Doomsday Device and we'll take over the world!" As Eggman is laughing about his plan, Gary Fleming wanted to sign up "Shane, can I join your Doomsday Plot?" But Shane says "No Gary! Only me, Tukayaway and Eggman are in this, not you!" And the plot to build the Doomsday Device begins!

How did you like that Garrett? That's all I had, you should check this out!
If you like it I can do Part 3 as well! Maybe someone else can do Part 3 so if any of you got any brains or Psycho Power? C'mon and write Part 3! Anyone execpt Shane and Tukayaway! Those two [...]!

Garrett · 02 Feb 2003, 21:29

Tell me, why do you hate Shane and Tukaway? What's the reason?

P.S. Your Part 2 doesn't connect with Part 1!! If you do a part 2, you should continue it from the point I finished part 1!! By the way, your story isn't about the same topic as the story that I wrote. Please stay on topic!!!

R. · 02 Feb 2003, 23:07

I told you in the other thread that I do not accept that behaviour in these forums. Unfortunately I didn't see this post before, otherwise I would have banned you immediately. This is the final warning: One more post like the the previous one, and you are history on these forums. Is that clear enough for you?

R.

M.Bison · 04 Feb 2003, 00:52

OK R. I make myself clear enough and I'm not gonna do that again 'cause I should really go by the saying of "Everyone is entitled to there own opion!"

Yours sincerely, M.Bison!

26 Jan 2003, 23:38	#1
Garrett Super Loafer Join Date: 30.05.2002 Location: In the room at the top Posts: 291	The ultimate story! I sat down and wrote the following lines out of my deepest fantasies. Part 1: My nocturnal stroll in Obsidian I wandered down the pitch black streets at the bottom of the city’s gorges. I was looking above my head and stared at the nocturnal sky. The buildings enthroned high into the clouds of the night like bizarre mutants. My eyes sank down. Black and yellow pools of light were floating around me. I reached a misty corner. Lost boys were sitting in the gutter like a tortured rat pack. They stared at me like stone cold statues. Their eyes were blank and their clothes were soaked with mud and blood. Maybe their own blood, maybe anyone elses, maybe the blood of victims, maybe the blood of the decaying carcass lying on the boardwalk in the chrystal moonlight. I fled the fast I could to get away from these god-forgotten creatures, away from these black shadows of perdition. I walked further down the street. Groaning voices whispered in the air. Roaring black metal machines stalked hungry behind my back. Then I stood in front of the entrance to a huge dark tunnel. Painfull angels were screaming in the distance. Then I saw a man coming out of the deep cold jaws of the tunnel. I couldn’t see his face, but I recognised his long hair flowing in the groaning wind, which came out of the black deep hole. I could see the silhouette of a Fender guitar began to take shape. I don’t remember if it was a Telecaster or a Stratocaster, but I do remember that its heart was made fully out of chrome. The man was embraced by his guitar. Then I saw the gleaming eyes in his face. I took one step back. The guy was pacing near and nearer. Finally, he stopped. And I saw his Fender guitar bleeding and the blood was dark and rich like wild berries. He wanted me to follow him, down this huge alley of moist stone, down this endless hallway. Fear was creeping through my bones, but no one could stop me following the guy down to the deep end. And the tunnel seemed to become a titan monster trying to engulf me with his maw. Maybe the story will be continued... continued, hmm, ahh yes, continued by YOU!!! GIVE IT A TRY!!! I'm waiting for Part 2!

28 Jan 2003, 23:24	#2
Garrett Super Loafer Join Date: 30.05.2002 Location: In the room at the top Posts: 291	Why don't you give your opinion about my short self-written story? And why isn't there anyone, who wants to continue it?

02 Feb 2003, 18:12	#3
M.Bison The Lurker in The Shadows Join Date: 03.12.2002 Location: Cork Posts: 209	OK Garrett, if you want Part 2 you'll get Part 2! Part 2 - Your Expirence On The Bikes And The Doomsday Device! You were lost in the woods, until you stumbled across a playground and it was 1:00PM you see Aaron and you wonder "Were am I?" Then you go into a basketball field and me and my two friends Paul and Nicholas go to play basketball and I ask you do you wanna play? Then you accept the offer but Gary Fleming rides into the field like a speeding tyrant! And we say to him "Watch where you're going next time!" Then the next time Gary passed the field he said "Ye are the Cheeky Girls!" But Nicholas shouts "Cut it out Gary! Stupid [...] [...] anyoyer Gary!" And Gary replied with "I'll give you a shove and run you over so you'll be dead!" Then a few hours later we were at a factory and you walk in the door and the video of I'd Lie For You was playing and you said "I really like the girl's red dress! Do you Bison?" And I replie with "I do!" But 1 hour later Tukayaway and Shane arrive "So whut are ye to lookin' at?" And we said to them "You don't address anyone that way! If yer lookin' of trouble, we'll [...] ye both!" And The Madman arrives and stops the confrontation "Tukayaway! Shane! If ye are talkin' insult about my girlfriend, you'll be dead!" Then Shane takes it serious "If your threatining to kill me and Tukayaway then we're buliding a Doomsday Device!" And back at Shane's headquaters Eggman was not to happy "Why would they wanna kill ye?" He asks Shane, "It's because we were talking insult about there girlfriend!" Then Tukayaway said "On the fourm you mean?" And Shane answerd with "Sort-of." Then Eggman replied with "Really? Just because you said that Patti or Pearl should someday be acting as the main female character? What does Bison be up to these days? Then I should build a Doomsday Device and we'll take over the world!" As Eggman is laughing about his plan, Gary Fleming wanted to sign up "Shane, can I join your Doomsday Plot?" But Shane says "No Gary! Only me, Tukayaway and Eggman are in this, not you!" And the plot to build the Doomsday Device begins! How did you like that Garrett? That's all I had, you should check this out! If you like it I can do Part 3 as well! Maybe someone else can do Part 3 so if any of you got any brains or Psycho Power? C'mon and write Part 3! Anyone execpt Shane and Tukayaway! Those two [...]!

02 Feb 2003, 21:29	#4
Garrett Super Loafer Join Date: 30.05.2002 Location: In the room at the top Posts: 291	Tell me, why do you hate Shane and Tukaway? What's the reason? P.S. Your Part 2 doesn't connect with Part 1!! If you do a part 2, you should continue it from the point I finished part 1!! By the way, your story isn't about the same topic as the story that I wrote. Please stay on topic!!!

02 Feb 2003, 23:07	#5
R. You dig. Join Date: 02.04.2002 Location: On the fothermucker Posts: 7,179	I told you in the other thread that I do not accept that behaviour in these forums. Unfortunately I didn't see this post before, otherwise I would have banned you immediately. This is the final warning: One more post like the the previous one, and you are history on these forums. Is that clear enough for you? R.

04 Feb 2003, 00:52	#6
M.Bison The Lurker in The Shadows Join Date: 03.12.2002 Location: Cork Posts: 209	OK R. I make myself clear enough and I'm not gonna do that again 'cause I should really go by the saying of "Everyone is entitled to there own opion!" Yours sincerely, M.Bison!