Our little Poets...

[Bren]

Tim,maybe not a contest,but somewhere to share our poems....i write poetr too.

White of High your poems are very beautiful.

i enjoyed reading the poems in this topic..the ones in English. I'm sure the others are good or funny but i'll never know.

[White of High]

Step Into Deep

I'm standing here on the edge of the rock
and listen the voice of the wind
Million tears are coming out of my eyes
and I've been victim by the daily grind

The Moon ain't shining on the sky
The Sun went under the horizon
In the endlessly pain I cry
and I leave this cruel and darker zone.

I step into deep
and fly with my dream
I step into deep
and listen the scream

Under the land I live so high
And admire the crucifix on my grave
I will never take the question why
Cause still my soul with me I save.

I've stepped into deep
and flown with my dream
I've stepped into deep
and I will never never weep...
...anymore...

[mariella]

Hi White,

Very powerful words. When did you write this?

Mariella

[White of High]

At now! In 10 minutes...

[mariella]

White, you are a genius!
Wish I could write like that.

Great day to you,

Mariella

[White of High]

Thanks!
And why? You find the answer in Site Feedback topic under '500 posts'! I don't know why there, but there...

[mariella]

I looked it up, yes why there?, but it's as good a place as any.
But I wouldn't have found it, if you hadn't told me!

So sorry for you, you are a very warm and loving person (most of the time) and you are very sincere. Please know you WILL be loved! Hopefully by this beautiful lady you love so much.
At least by many of us here. If writing 'helps' please write all the poems you want, you are very good at it!

Look after yourself,

Mariella

[Danny L]

WoH man (okay, bad joke... )

Great lyrics.

You should be doing far greater things than what you're doing now.

By the way, what are you doing now?

Regards,
Danny
Future Singer/Actor/Director/Producer etc............. (I'll get round to them all - gimmie 30 years)

[dottie]

LIFE

I wish - I wish - I Wish,
A thousand miles away from here,
with our two children Oh so dear,
A sun that sets in a peaceful sky,
and leaves me asking Why? Why? Why?
Will we ever feel the gladness?
or are we destined for a life of sadness.
The future holds no threat for me
it is only to clear to see - to see.
Perhaps one day the sun will shine
in a way to be almost sublime,
and at that moment I will know how this life might try to grow,
and fulfuil dreams as of yet undreamed

[dottie]

The end of the road

He doesn't love me anymore
That I know for sure
He sees me as a waste of space
not wanted in his life

He puts me down
When I act like a clown
He cann't bear for me to be happy

He sees me as a millstone
forever around his neck
I wish I could escape this life with him

I've given him all I can
I cann't give anymore
That I know for sure

[dottie]

Future

Dare I wonder
Dare I perceive
A happier life if I should leave

A day thats filled with Joy and gladness
Not hopefulness and untold sadness

Give me the courage
Give me the hope
With this future life
I know I can cope

[dottie]

Can you not see?

Daysa of sunlight and joy,
were all I knew when I met you boy,
Yes, you gave me the world and everything in it,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

The years rolled by and the yearning became stronger,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

My bags were packed and ready,
A last wave, the tears flowed, but I couldn't stay,
It was never enough for me, can you not see.

[Bren]

sad poems Dotster,but beautiful too.

[Bren]

Fly Free

Fly free
my heart will follow
your bright wings towards the sun

Fly free
my eyes will watch
your pathway
through the sky of no return

Fly free
and in the hollow
of empty years
that time will leave
in you
my heart will still believe
my eyes will never learn
but helplessly
shall search the skies
for thy return.

[White of High]

Originally Posted by The Joker

By the way, what are you doing now?

At now I'm breaking with a girl!
In e-mail...
What a hell am I doing???

[dottie]

Beautiful Bren

[dottie]

This was dedicated to my late mum in law( an absolutely super person) by her husband.

MY DARLING

My Darling, My Darling,
You gave me the love that I was forever searching
Life became alive once more
When once again you opened the door to the treasure of heart, and the love of yourself
Yes dear I became alive once more.

The men recently in your life are lucky too
as they have known you through and through
They may have been good and kind, and left a slight pang for you in the past, now behind.

But ask yourself dear, did they not have their chance?
Or did they only want a sly romance?
Or did they only need their ego blue?
And not really want a permantly you.

My Darling, My Darling,
Don't ever lock me out
Give me your love, and you will see me true.

My Darling, My Darling,
On this birthday of yours, which I shall share,
and in sickness or health, I shall always care,
So don't chase moonbeams of bygone days,
Else you'll end up in a permanent haze.

My Darling, My Darling,
My Home, My Life, My Love is yours,
Not much to offer, no riches, or wealth
Just me, just me, just myself.

My Darling, My Darling,
Give me all of yourself, and you shall be my goddess of love,
Flying into my life and never out,
So that I can chant to the world what my love is all about.
Yours eyes are lovely and truly blue,
When thoughts of love enter you,
So keep them for me this way dear,
For no other and deeply clear.

My Darling, My Darling.

[Bren]

lovely Dotster

[Rob The Badger]

The Fancy Waistcoat And The Tambourine Band
Screw the landowners
They don't deserve it
All the people on the other side
The ones with the shovels
Give them the fancy waistcoat
And the tamborine band

Screw the leaders
They don't lead
They lie, cheat and steal
Give it to the people lying in the drain
They don't want it
What's the point?
is what I say
Give all those butlers
to the ones in the gutter

Screw the people
Flock of sheep
Should end up burning on a fiery heap
Blood on carpet
Blood on stone
Blood on raw meat ripped from bone
Screw the people every one
Liars, beggers;
lawyers, cheaters,
stealers, wheelers
every one

More to the mountains
is what I say
Cry from every mountainside
"Let freedom ring!"
~~~~~~~s all of them;
"Freedom" ring;

Cry for the people who know the truth
Give them the fancy waistcoat and the tambourine band
They deserve it, every one.

[dottie]

Originally Posted by Bren The Bat

lovely Dotster

Bren these two were very much in love as you can see - we could do with a bit more of this kind of love in this world :)

[Bren]

indeed we could Dotster

[dottie]

Originally Posted by Bren The Bat

indeed we could Dotster

Maybe we could spread some of this love around this forum - pass it on

[Bren]

To My Friends

Turn me with the wind,
i will follow
Once i did choose
where i would wander
Now you light my path
and all else is darkness.
So i walk
where your lights shine
To soften external darkness,
As a candle flame
Softens the glow of a room
stepped into from night.
Now no matter where,
your candles burn
In the hollow of my heart
and there light
Is with me always.

[White of High]

Bren!
Are these real emotions?
When you are writing poems in the background are there true feelings???
Sometimes I imagine a fairyworld and the pictures coming through...

[Bren]

Originally Posted by White of High

Bren!
Are these real emotions?
When you are writing poems in the background are there true feelings???
Sometimes I imagine a fairyworld and the pictures coming through...

True feelings White Of high. My poems always reflect my thoughts and feelings at the time of writing them.Something might happen in the course of a day ,or i might ,see something,or experience something,that has an effect on me and i put my feelings/emotions ,into a poem.Wether it be feelings of joy at something beautiful,sadness,loss loneliness,despair,whatever,i put my feelings into a poem.