Giving Tree: Wario's Extended Version

Wario · 09 Jun 2013, 08:17

Tell me what you think of it. I LOVE the song, just thought Id add a few things.

https://soundcloud.com/warioloaf/giv...tended-version

AndrewG · 09 Jun 2013, 11:21

I turned off during the speech.

CarylB · 09 Jun 2013, 12:01

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Originally Posted by AndrewG

I turned off during the speech.

Have to say I did too .. my whytf for today I guess

I love the song too .. monologue doesn't add anything for me I'm afraid

Mr. Happy · 09 Jun 2013, 12:08

I think your intro goes for too long (although if you could add something else over the top the second / third time through it would be better), and I don't think going back to the chorus at the end of the clapping really adds anything to the song, but I actually love the speech. That was a cool touch, imo

Vickip · 09 Jun 2013, 15:49

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Originally Posted by Wario

Tell me what you think of it. I LOVE the song, just thought Id add a few things.

https://soundcloud.com/warioloaf/giv...tended-version

Sorry but I think the song is absolutely perfect the way it is, and won't listen.

emma811981 · 09 Jun 2013, 16:30

I agree the song is perfect as it is

misterfive · 09 Jun 2013, 21:38

The Biblical intro needs some snag to it, you know like Jim's monologue Life, Death, and a American Guitar. Have a vocalist who puts passion into it with some background effects to increase its potency. The intro the way it is just makes it seem too... religious. The Extended part is basically a cut into the ending choir again with a edited end which doesn't sound quite right. You should work on making transitions more seamless.

Ollie241189 · 10 Jun 2013, 22:00

I get what you were trying to acheive with this but I think you complicated a simple arrangement in my opinion. Not saying I didn't enjoy it but it was too complicated for a simple arrangement

09 Jun 2013, 08:17	#1
Wario Monstro helps me spell things... Join Date: 05.01.2007 Location: Masculine, Pennsylvania Posts: 9,105	Giving Tree: Wario's Extended Version Tell me what you think of it. I LOVE the song, just thought Id add a few things. https://soundcloud.com/warioloaf/giv...tended-version

09 Jun 2013, 11:21	#2
AndrewG I hope your salmon sucks! Join Date: 18.01.2004 Location: Northamptonshire Posts: 7,077	I turned off during the speech.

09 Jun 2013, 12:08	#4
Mr. Happy Guest Join Date: 13.02.2010 Location: Posts: 736	I think your intro goes for too long (although if you could add something else over the top the second / third time through it would be better), and I don't think going back to the chorus at the end of the clapping really adds anything to the song, but I actually love the speech. That was a cool touch, imo

09 Jun 2013, 16:30	#6
emma811981 Loafer Join Date: 02.06.2007 Location: Mirfield, West Yorkshire Posts: 89	I agree the song is perfect as it is

09 Jun 2013, 21:38	#7
misterfive Super Loafer Join Date: 23.03.2012 Location: Canada Posts: 232	The Biblical intro needs some snag to it, you know like Jim's monologue Life, Death, and a American Guitar. Have a vocalist who puts passion into it with some background effects to increase its potency. The intro the way it is just makes it seem too... religious. The Extended part is basically a cut into the ending choir again with a edited end which doesn't sound quite right. You should work on making transitions more seamless.

10 Jun 2013, 22:00	#8
Ollie241189 Guest Join Date: 27.10.2011 Posts: 408	I get what you were trying to acheive with this but I think you complicated a simple arrangement in my opinion. Not saying I didn't enjoy it but it was too complicated for a simple arrangement